some of the suggestions I got:
- The masthead on the front cover was to far to the left
- On the front cover the two shapes which are white with text in, to change them to a darker colour
- try doing the background images as a fade
- masthead and more text more bold
- maybe put price on front cover
I have took some of these onboard already and I have made some changes, the changes I have made are:
- I have moved the mast head on the front cover more central
- I have changed the shapes to darker colours to fit in with the house colours so that they are constant throughout
The changes that I am going to consider are:
- Making the masthead and more writing more bold to make it stand out more
- Try fading the background images
I have took onboard about the price being on my front cover but I have this on my contents page and I prefer it there as also do other magazines have the price on the contents page.
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