Audience feedback

From putting my magazine on a social media site here is some of the positive feedback I got.

• easy to read
• eye catching 
• they knew what audience it was aimed for
• they love the colours, they work well together and are constant throughout
• like the way pictures are set out
• they like the text
• they like the way I have used the twitter and facebook icons
• the colour scheme complements that its a rock genre 
• they love that I have used buzz words
• It attracts the audience attention 
• the way the images have eye contact
• the text on the double page spread as 'it is quite conversational making the audience feel closer to the group and maybe feel as though they know the group on a more personal level'

Audience feedback

I put my magazine on a social media site to get some audience feedback and I got some really positive feedback and some suggestions of changes.

some of the suggestions I got: 

• The masthead on the front cover was to far to the left
• On the front cover the two shapes which are white with text in, to change them to a darker colour
• try doing the background images as a fade
• masthead and more text more bold
• maybe put price on front cover 

I have took some of these onboard already and I have made some changes, the changes I have made are:

• I have moved the mast head on the front cover more central
• I have changed the shapes to darker colours to fit in with the house colours so that they are constant throughout

The changes that I am going to consider are:

• Making the masthead and more writing more bold to make it stand out more
• Try fading the background images 

I have took onboard about the price being on my front cover but I have this on my contents page and I prefer it there as also do other magazines have the price on the contents page.

Changes made to my contents page

As I was about to put my contents page up for audience feedback I realised a mistake which I had made. On my contents page I have a screenshot of my double page spread and I had made changes to my double page spread which was moving the text to the right. After making these changes I forgot to change the screenshot to the new double page spread on my contents page.

here is the old one...

here is my new one...